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As the sun behind the mountains set
You hang your head as you have failed
Tears have made your cheeks wet.
You lost what you came to get
The heavens could hear how you wailed
As the sun behind the mountains set.
It was all on a bet
Oh if they could see how your face had paled
Tears have made your cheeks wet.
In the dusk you had cast your net
And watched the fish as it flailed
As the sun behind the mountains set.
The night has come and you have slept
Your thoughts have trailed
Tears have made you cheeks wet.
In the morn your raft was set
And from the island you have sailed
As the sun behind the mountains set
Tears have made your cheeks wet.
- by Akanescute |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/28/2009 |
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- Title: behind the mountains
- Artist: Akanescute
- Description: couldn't fit the full title in so yeah, I did this for creative writing and liked it.
- Date: 06/28/2009
- Tags: behind mountains
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Hazuki210 - 07/05/2009
- I loved your peom! =3
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- Latreice - 06/28/2009
- wow. its very good.
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- XxXCriss-Angel-Fan-1XxX - 06/28/2009
- red the first two para and thought AWSOMENESS
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