Love Winds.

• Artist: XxNekoSorceressxX
• Description: Yes. another love poem. I tried my best on this, though I feel that it is not all that good.
• Date: 06/29/2009
• Tags: love winds

Let the wind whisper to me.
As I sing your lulliaby.
To all that want to see me.
This music takes me so high.

My stomach flutters.
Everytime I here your name.
They call us lovers.
But I'll love is not the same.

It's so much better.
Even if we get in fights.
Getting through this together,
We can see the light.

Listen to to Wind.
it is calling to me.
It says
Love is an emotion.
Just wanting to be free.

Comments

[XxCookieRawrzxX]

I think it's good (4/5)
However, two grammactical errors:
1. Here = hear
2. I'll = our

otherwise, I still think it's good

[xoxo_kisslove_xoxo]

HEY NICE I LIKE IT
4/5 CAUSE YOU KEEP WRIEING FOOT STOPS

[Lady Alice Road Kamelot]

It's better than you think. People always say their work sucks until someone else says otherwise. I really like this! I hope you change your opinion.