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As i lie in bed looking at my white ceiling,
thinking what to where tommorrow,
my friends were all emo,
and i didnt think it was cool,
but thats what everyone is doing so i thought i would to,
i walked out the house that day with a long sleave black shirt,
i arrived at the bus stop as my friends were showing there cuts,
they had so many and i only had three,
as they laughed at me i had to bring up my rep,
that night i got home i started my record,
7 minutes later i had so many cuts i couldnt count and i was getting woozy,
then i covered themup and went to lie down to show them off at school tommorrow,
then i fell into a deep sleep,
when i woke up i was in a firey place,
very auful,
i thougt i was having a nightmare,
but i couldnt wake up and then i relized why,
i was in the worst place of all,
that place is called hell.
- by babygurl297 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/01/2009 |
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- Title: The emo contest
- Artist: babygurl297
- Description: dont do the thing that other people do be yourself just for you and one day it will pay off
- Date: 07/01/2009
- Tags: good sole
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Meli Milk - 07/06/2009
- Um.....good start as a writer but I think you need to check spelling and use better grammar and maybe find better words to use. smile Rate back.
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- -Tessifer - 07/03/2009
- I agree with onionio.
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- onionio - 07/01/2009
- I encourage you to improve your spelling. It was a nice idea, but your piece was rather weak. Keep practicing!
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