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i hiding for the day i cant fing a place to stay im hiding from the light im hiding
from light
- Title: hiding
- Artist: bludzomby
- Description: i wrote this
- Date: 07/02/2009
- Tags: hiding
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Comments (2 Comments)
- NecroseKnight - 07/06/2009
- you need work.
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- Greeneroo - 07/02/2009
- Wow. This is the worst poem I've ever read. You need to work on grammar, spelling, phrasing. Either that, or take some time before submitting another "poem." Definitely get a five-year-old to proofread your work before you submit another piece.
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