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When your around my heart go's.
When your around it seems it flows.
When your around I don't know what to say.
When your around I want to kiss you.
- by XXDeathWeaponXX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2009 |
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- Title: when ur around
- Artist: XXDeathWeaponXX
- Description: i cant really explain and i dont really know how to write a poem....
- Date: 07/20/2009
- Tags: love
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- the real gifted brother - 07/21/2009
- its alright its not that bad of a poem your just missing a few things. heres some helpful advice okay take a look at my poem's on love (theres two) it might help you learn how poems are best and they might inspire you.
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