The Darkness

• Artist: Invisiblegirl130
• Description: ITs jut something that comes form with in me. If i want a happy poem I think i want ti itit trickels down the palms of my hands and into the souls of my fingers . when i put ap to papper it seeps through reavealing my darkest thoughts to you.
  
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• Date: 07/22/2009
• Tags: darkness

My shadow is my only friend. To others i bring suffering. You knock and no one hears you. You fear that someone killed you. You hope for the best. That final and eternal rest. Your buring. Your stomach churning. To those you hate you savor in stead of haste. For that would be a waste. You mourn for somethig thats not yours. But you never get it. You plea for help but sulk n it. It ruins the ruins of your soul you heart is stone cold. To the ones you love you give thanks but your swallowed in a dark abyss and you hear this,"The good inside us, is only a shadow of the DARKNESS in our sevles." And with that you preveal. emo scream stressed sad mad cry ninja

Comments

[Diosa de Armarrio]

This would've been much better if it'd had actual lines, correct spelling, and proper capitalization. Keep trying, though. I'd recommend getting someone to edit your work for you.