every time

• Artist: Intachi-Onami San
• Description:
• Date: 07/23/2009
• Tags: every time everytime ithurts hurts

Every time i kiss you and you push me away
-it hurts-

Every time i hug you and you tell me no
-it hurts-

Every time i say i love you and you dont say it back
-it hurts-

Every time i open my heart to you and you seal it shut
-it hurts-

Every time i lay my life on the line for you and you just let me die
-it hurts-

Every time you say you love me and i know your not being truthful
-it really, really, hurts-

Comments

[Bloodysideofthemoon]

It was good i thought. Sometimes its just hard to find the right words even for your own life. I'm wonderful at poetry (or so i'm told) but yeah...

[RAWR_blue]

I agree with vamp! But Good job!

[Intachi-Onami San]

i just got bored im not really that good at poetry im an artist!

[Nevaeh_Marie12]

its ok, could be better but brava!