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the government is shaking, the anit-christ is waking,
all this crap they think will help
the economy, we'd be better off with anarchy.
and society just worships those idiots, can't they see the s**t they've gotten
us in?
the welfare, the war,
the taxes, yah, that'll get us out of debt.
well i cant help but laugh, our generation is last.
we, the kids, the future, well im scared to be in that future.
if there even is one at all, this world is going to fall.
and obama, the grand a** hole of them all,
him and his terrorist buds, they'll make sure this old land falls.
judgement day is coming, thanks to all the dumb shits that voted for hussein
(oh yah, thats not suspicious) thanks to his "antics" to help the world grow sain
thanks to his "plan" and idiot society who just ate right out of his hand
judgement day is upon us.
do you shits feel smart now?
- by Mc muffiner |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2009 |
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- Title: The idiots
- Artist: Mc muffiner
- Description: this is exactly how i feel. i didnt write it to please people, because im certain it wont, but to those who know what "the idiots" have gotten us into, i feel for you. may god have mercy when our brains our blown in world war 3.
- Date: 07/25/2009
- Tags: idiots plan smart judgement society
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Mc muffiner - 07/26/2009
- uhhh, im not really sure what that has to do with this, sorry panda. and jarmis, like i said it was not meant to please many, not meant to be "interesting". it is how i feel about the world and means something to me. sorry if that was not interesting to you smile
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- panada0746 - 07/25/2009
- doesn't matter if u have a lot of voices, just maybe one voice can be heard.
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- chick_devil - 07/25/2009
- Hek ya. I feel u. Dont mind Jarmis. I loves it. 5/5. Can I Print this and show it around. Pm me and tell me ur on my fav
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- Jarmis - 07/25/2009
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All political views aside, this is not a very good poem. It has basically no meter, there are about a half dozen spelling errors (sain is spelled sane, anit-christ is spelled anti-christ, and yah is spelled yeah), and it really lacks any descriptive metaphors except right at the beginning and end.
In the future, maybe you could try to focus more on making interesting poetry, instead of just swearing and writing controversial politics. - Report As Spam