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Just imagine it
You and me
Sitting under a cherry blossom tree
You in my lap, with my arms around you.
Everything is calm and quiet
No one else around but you and me
The only thing going on is the wind
Shaking the petals off the tree
Pink petals dancing in the air
Like snowflakes falling from the sky
Its beautiful.
I cant imagine anything better
Than watching it with you.
This is perfect.
Just you and me
- by xAssassin of Darknessx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/28/2009 |
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- Title: you and me
- Artist: xAssassin of Darknessx
- Description: i made this poem when i met my true love. i dedicate this to her cause im in love with her. and i want to always be there with her
- Date: 07/28/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sesskogaru - 07/29/2009
- *chuckles* I can see it now. Very thoughtful of you but I think this poem can be better. No offense but if it had a lil more work on it, it could go far. ^^ I like it though but I see something in this one that screams "I can be better." Just some more work and careful consideration so it can be great. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....but that is just me. wink
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- TheGreatHunter - 07/28/2009
- erm @.@ u couldve used other words besides tree
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