Memories

• Artist: oX-silent-rose-Xo
• Description: We had to write a poem for English at school about something we are passionate about. My one ended up like this. Please tell me what you think.
• Date: 07/29/2009
• Tags: memories

Back then there was never
Anything to worry about
Before we wouldn't care
About the things or people around.

But now those are just memories
That will one day be forgotten
But still I hide from that truth
'Cause those memories I want to keep remembering.

But even so,
Now, I am here
More memories I want to make
Whether there are smiles or tears

Because now I know
That even if those memories fade,
I will never forget
With whom those memories I made.

Comments

[ProfessorKC]

Matters how old you are ... there are quite a few errors but I could see this being outstanding for certain grades in school. Couldn't tell you anything certain without knowing that so I won't rate this at this time ... good luck on future writing!

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

yea thanks!

[Yandere Neko]

I think the first line should be "back then there was never" not "were"

[oX-silent-rose-Xo]

thanx so much~

[Xdracul_lilitheX]

It's gravy.
I love how some of the best stuff comes when you least expect it. It's so short, but you put a ton of ish into those four stanzas. I gave it 4 stars :]