The Land of the Dead.

• Artist: LucarioStefan
• Description:
• Date: 08/08/2009
• Tags: death sorrow

I see it now,

within my grave,

the place where

I must go.

I see it now,

within myself,

the form that

I must take.

I see it now,

within my life,

the wrongs that

I have done.

I see it now,

within my grasp,

a better place

to flee to.

I see it now,

beyond my power,

the place where

I must go.

I see it now.

The Land of the Dead.

Comments

[HTOB]

its no different then every other poem i've read

[mirachan3]

Interesting. I find that it gives suppense, is creative and somewhat original. However the theme of death is really overused. I like the rythym and the structure, so I give it a four.