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They ask "can you come out to play?"
They pull each night and every day,
I lie to them, I just want to stay
Inside my room withdrawn away.
Somehow they just can't seem to see,
The need to be alone in me.
Always with others I just can't be,
For only alone do I feel free.
This will one day surley change,
Everyday a certain range.
I could tell them this, but in exchange,
They would likely sneer, call me deranged.
What's so bad about being alone?
Not always near friends or on the phone?
Love and care for them I have surely shown,
For we've laughed and cried and broken bones.
I'm not the least a lonely soul,
I've much in my life, I'm nearly whole.
Yet criticism is all that they dole,
And claim that my heart is black as coal.
I admit sometimes that I long,
To sing a chorus, not a solo song.
Sometimes solitude just feels wrong,
Sometimes I am just alone too long.
In these times I'll come out to play,
Be it night or sunny day.
I'll be out with them and want to stay,
Outside my home, my room, away.
- Title: Alone
- Artist: DH88
- Description: The feelings behind this one are pretty straight forward really. I'm the kind of person that likes to have a fair bit of time to themselves. I often take a lot of flack for it, but it's come to the point where I can shrug it off. I wrote the first stanza of this one and it just sort of kept coming out. So here it is, I hope you like it. If you did, drop me a comment. If you didn't, drop me a comment. Choice is golden, Eh? ^_^
- Date: 08/09/2009
- Tags: alone
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Airborne Penguin - 08/04/2010
- I agree with iinsanely Sane - and I also give the same rating. The first and last stanzas were what really made it great.
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- Tinzing - 07/04/2010
- I love it~ As a fellow writter its amazing keep speaking~
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- iinsanely Sane - 08/11/2009
- I loved it, some of the stanzas were a little bit wobbly, it must have been hard to make everything rhyme, but at the end of a few stanzas you'd make it better again, and I loved the ending. 4/5
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