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I don't understand how to feel
This feeling is out of control
it does not envy, it does not kill
so tell me how can it be real
It is forgiving and a sacrifice
Believe me though its worth the price
for the only thing that can see
are the open eyes that belive
Youve got to understand
this did not come from man
but from heaven above
which man can only call love
- by Blood Lust 325 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/11/2009 |
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- Title: The Best feeling
- Artist: Blood Lust 325
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- Date: 08/11/2009
- Tags: best feeling
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Comments (2 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 08/14/2009
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I see some efforts at rhyming but they are in vain xD. Not all poems have to rhyme. Try to make it flow a little bit better maybe? Just some suggestions no neeed to take offense as some people do.
4/5 from me!
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