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What were you thinking?
It was to me whom you took a liking.
If you loved me so much
Then why did you lie to me such?
Because of that, i loved you.
Now what am I to do?
I feel like I've been played for a fool.
Did you just use me as a tool
For this thing they call love?
My heart dove
Down into the dark parts of my soul.
Now on the way back up, it's taking its toll.
Feeling a sadness I've never felt before,
I find a strange new door.
Not one of sorrow or anger,
But something a little stranger.
It was something I never knew I had.
Ever so closer, I open it a tad.
I feel a sense of devastation.
I walked in with some hesitation.
The first thing I see is you.
Now I ask myself who?
Do I really know?
What can you show?
There is nothing there.
I grab a hold and tear.
There is no trace of this stranger.
I find myself ever so stronger.
I love you no longer.
What were you thinking?
- Title: What were you thinking?
- Artist: tkdman42
- Description: This is actually something very personal. I wrote it when dealing with some rough times. I think the poem pretty much explains itself.
- Date: 08/12/2009
- Tags: were thinking
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Rawxii Doll - 08/23/2009
- thats so depressing. but its really good. 5/5
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- The Buradi Mari - 08/13/2009
- sad I'm sorry that you took it so hard. I'm sorry she lied. I'm sorry you're unhappy. *gives you chocolate* It always makes me feel better. 5/5
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- Captain Kamikaze - 08/12/2009
- aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww.........that's sooo sad! sad 5/5
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- f-u-c-k-e-r-123456 - 08/12/2009
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I'm so very sorry once again sad .
I voted 5/5.
Please atleast be my friend? - Report As Spam