prison with no walls

• Artist: xxblue101
• Description: hope this is ok...doesnt rhyme but then poetry doesnt need to rhyme!!!
• Date: 08/14/2009
• Tags: prison with walls

spiriling stairs im running down
closer to the end
i burst through the door
back to the begining
my mind is aching
waiting
hoping
ill find my way out
i'll try
but fail
forever we will all be trapped
grow weak and mad
in our minds
a prison with no walls

Comments

[himemiya yuuki]

You did a very good job 5/5 ^.^

[Hunters Gambit]

I like it, taking a thought and putting it into something unique.

[Tetsumi Suki]

o-o;;;