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this is goodbye
i just hope not to cry
this is goodbye
i hope to see you again sometime
this is goodbye
as you slip away we begin to cry
our paths will never meet again
im sorry, i dont know where to begin
everyday we try
to be the best ?
to act the best?
in a world without a meaning with out you
so plz come again to me i cant let you go
dont slip away in the dead of night
it would be an awefull fright
now your dead or is it just in my head?
please come again
dont let go
o dont let go
- by pvt_Pearson |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/28/2009 |
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- Title: this is goodbye
- Artist: pvt_Pearson
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Description:
well this is like a poem/lyrics tell me what ya think
well not my best work at all but plz no mean comments if u do like it let me know if u want me to write more i would be very happy to - Date: 08/28/2009
- Tags: goodbye
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Comments (5 Comments)
- -LalyPassion- - 04/30/2011
- Awwwwwiiee. I love it. ^-^
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- deeanna1212 - 09/04/2009
- Yes, I agreed with Unloved Crayon.. work on your grammar, and well, capital your 'i' s at least
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- awootism - 09/03/2009
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Work on your grammar
Its not bad, But I just cant feel the pain :T - Report As Spam
- TeKNo fAcTioN - 08/30/2009
- a little to much exaggeration on the crying aspect. it was good though!
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- blue tear dada - 08/29/2009
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sniff sniff
-its wonderful - Report As Spam
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