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Dancing,swaying,moving in a ring.
Laughing,singing,living in a ring.
People talking,gossiping,in a ring.
Eyes follow,minds wonder,about the ring.
Life continuing,thrivieng,in a ring.
In a line,they walk in,because of a ring.
Enters a young girl,because of a ring.
A man stands,because of a ring.
Two stand togther,because of a ring.
A boy walks in,holding a ring.
And the two join togther,with a ring.
- Title: Ring
- Artist: csifool
- Description: i really dont have any thing to say exsept,hope you enjoy.And its a good poem for a wedding.but srry its copy righted.lol jk,but ask if you wanna use it.
- Date: 09/06/2009
- Tags: ring
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Comments (1 Comments)
- meeleea - 09/08/2009
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Cute despite the fact that I'm not too enthused about weddings in general. ;D The repetition is quite reminiscent of Under That Tree. I'd like to read some of your poetry in a different style.
(Sorry to mention it again, but that lack of space after commas is bothering me. >< It makes it difficult to read. Though, maybe I just have to stop being so OCD...) - Report As Spam
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