Flutter By

• Artist: Kittythulu
• Description: Deffinitely not my best work, but I rather liked it. It's slightly depressing, but not too bad. It's what you make of it, so, let me know what you think. Enjoy!
• Date: 09/06/2009
• Tags: flutter

Flutter by, butterfly
I know you tell me lies
wings double sided
behind their eyes, you hide.

Flutter by, butterfly
I know you've done me wrong
I stand beside
you, whilst you've been gone so long

Flutter by, butterfly
someday they'll clip your wings
of our goodbyes
tell me can you remember just one thing?

Flutter by, butterfly
I know you'll care not once
when all our love has died
and your the one who's won

Comments

[hiran cc]

i thought it was really good! 4/5 from me!
nice reference image too biggrin

[Kittythulu]

Yeah lol. I was in a very interesting mood. ^^; Thanks for the feed back guys! <3

[Frost Elemental]

It's good, sad, but still good, well written, and you say you can't write a poem

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

I rather liked it too. ^^ 3/5