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when ever in the world do you feel loved by someone?
you feel loved about all the time but is it really you or are you making it up?
people think they love you but really they love there fave cell-phone or book just as much.
idk i like it when peopl think they like me but really they just like my a** or watever i think its funny!
love is power you can take advantages or you can take chances watever you chose is going to be watever you may like to take advantage and make them your little slave.
or you will really truely love them and want to be theres forever watever you chose will be wat you chose.
im not the one to judge you.
leave comments or watever if you wanna say something about it. sweatdrop
- by the_heldback_retard |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/10/2009 |
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- Title: loves crazy things
- Artist: the_heldback_retard
- Description: idk um things i like to say about love
- Date: 09/10/2009
- Tags: loves crazy things
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Comments (3 Comments)
- conflicting actor - 09/19/2009
- You changed from formal to a more personal talk later on. It's ok just weird that you did so.
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- pyropop2009 - 09/17/2009
- I actually think because the poem is from the perspective of someone so young and with such a young perspective the text speak is kind of cool. Thats just me though. I'm not great with grammar anyway.
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- Dancing Armadillo Mage - 09/14/2009
- My suggestions would be drop the chatspeak and use proper capitalization.
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