- Towering high in the sky looking high above the ocean live. Thinking looking pondering. One fateful step, everything a blur. Plummeting into the blue, life flashing like a slide show. Sleeping with the fishes is all that is left. Gravity so far out of reach into the ocean I sink. The fish all around swimming without a care. Oh how to be free like the fishes. Looking up the light is bright. The light at the end of the tunnel or the sun perhaps. Leaving mankind behind with all it's greed and hate. Into the ocean the last thing that is left.
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- | Submitted on 09/11/2009 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- original288 - 09/19/2009
- its amazing smile
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- ll Kyoya_Okamiyasha ll - 09/13/2009
- I love it, and i also can understand what you're talking about ^___^
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- ToastyMuffen - 09/13/2009
- omg wow thats really good and i understand what your talking about ^^
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- Pixie Nyxie - 09/12/2009
- OwO I like it
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- Collinrocks11 - 09/11/2009
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Grrr....
You are thinking.....
looking....
pondering.......
Perhaps you are thinking a different life....
fishes, i believe don't have emotions, but are without a care and swim.
Unlike us we are ignorant. hmm...
*brain cells die* i gives up.... - Report As Spam
- Collinrocks11 - 09/11/2009
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Hmm...the sky is peace when nothing is torrential....
umm....suicide? Did you have a near death experience and you are placing it in a poem? Because you can actually picture it in your head :] I like it tons<333 - Report As Spam
- vwx - 09/11/2009
- when i was reading this i actually saw the ocean the sky..i almost felt the find on my face and all
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