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Loves past
Loves past ends with the sun
i could feel your arms around me
lifes gone
i could feel you were the only one
it wasn't the same
she walked in...
you blew me off
like romeo dissing juliet
or....
you it's the future were not together
i feel dead
loves a tradgedy
love's past... cry
- by superprincesspeach789 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/10/2009 |
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- Title: love's past
- Artist: superprincesspeach789
- Description: Aww i almost fell in love till my heart got shredded...
- Date: 10/10/2009
- Tags: loves past
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Comments (2 Comments)
- vv7722 - 10/21/2009
- uhmmm... I don't like the concept, but the poem's real nice! 4/5. (Concept thing isn't your fault; I just don't believe in love ;o )
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- noreturn86 - 10/11/2009
- wonder why he/she did that to you?
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