For you

• Artist: mesme_15
• Description: Ahh! i hate it!it's werid i'm kinda new on poems so yea i think it sucks
• Date: 10/20/2009
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i' want to die under you hands,
no matter what you say,
i'll fallow everywhere.
through heven,
through hell ,
I'll do sins,
for what you want.
I'll kill,
for what you need.
i don't know what to do,
when your gone.
i love you,
can't you even accpet that?

Comments

[XxRebelChildxX]

i like the tone too, just that feeling in this poem that your forever bonded with someone and you'll always be with them is so amazing. 5/5

[Raiden Evas]

i love the tone of wild desperation you create just in the first couple lines. kudos to you.