" I just can't move on "

• Artist: iieLKillerDolLeLii
• Description: " HEY GUYS! THANKS FOR TRYING TO FIND TYM ON READING MY ENTRY. THIS IS NOT A POEM, BUT ITS A LYRICS OF MY NEW SONG FOR MY BAND. PLEASE, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT IT IF ITS TOO CORNY, OR IF ITS NICE. THANK YOU!!! =^_^= "
  
  ~Killer Doll~
• Date: 10/29/2009
• Tags: almost over

" I just Can't Move On "
Verse 1:
I had loved once... I had loved twice... I had loved thrice, had given all my chances...
Had loved fourth time... What's left behind? ( Nothing... ) Still the same when I loved the fifth time...

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Oh, don't you think, its easy to love, another one!...

Chorus:
When you're still my number 1! When you're the one I'm dreaming of! And when everything's so wrong thinking of you, still feels right!
You're still my number 1! I can't turn off my phone! As long as this feelings still for you... I just can't move on... ( Oh, woh )


Verse 2:
The future rise... On different tides... But you are still the apple of my eyes...
And when I'll know, how to get this feeling through, I'll get you out my head, and the memories of you...


Bridge: Do you know how it feels, when the feeling's so real, and you're just left behind with nothing to say?! Do you know how it hurts, when the feeling submerge, deep into my veins! And left me out of Control?!!!! ( OH! OH YEAH!!!! )

( Repeat Chorus )

I just can't,..... move....on....

Comments

[bubbley_bubble_head]

it sounds really good and sweet I love it!

[iieLKillerDolLeLii]

ok i'll try to post my band's music in a website. i'll give you the url. Right now we're working on it.

[Monjong-wer]

what's your band's name??? i would like to see that with some cool music! =D

[iieLKillerDolLeLii]

Thanks! I'll try to add up something in the first verse. =^_^=

[Bloodysideofthemoon]

I like it!! I think the first verse could use a little more work, but I really like the rest of it!!
It'd be cool to hear it with the music.