Invisible Silence

• Artist: xAxisPowerItalyx
• Description: life is hard for some people, I was in some hard times when I wrote this poem.
• Date: 10/29/2009
• Tags: invisible silence

I'm flying,
Do you see me?
I'm singing,
Do you hear me?
Am I invisible?
I can't be seen...

I cry everynight,
Because no one's here.
I wait everyday,
for someone to come.

I'm here,
Will you come?
I'm searching,
where are you?

I look and look,
But i see nothing.
I long for comfort,
Yet i find no one.

I'm flying,
Do you see me?
I'm singing,
Do you hear me?

I'm saying,
Goodbye...

Comments

[Misunae]

Hmmz Ima give it a 4.
Should check out my poems some time.

[xAxisPowerItalyx]

Ah! i have to change that DDD:

[zephasus]

Really good. You were supposed to write the poem in the blue part lol. 5/5 rate back? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101810651#title