Waiting

• Artist: redHeadfones
• Description: I wrote this when I was in grade 9 (so...about 4 years ago.). We were learning poetry and had to write a poem. and this was the poem I read to the class ( i was really upset when people thought I got it off the internet, but i guess that meant it was good ^^;) I would love to hear some comments on what you think of it ^-^
• Date: 10/29/2009
• Tags: waiting

Waiting
There I was, sitting in the rain
Under a bridge waiting
Waiting for someone to come
Hope that they could spare some change
I feel so cold, so hungry, so dead
I'm living in a cardboard box beside a highway,
hoping for my guardian angel to come & rescue me
I feel so tired,
But I'm too scared to sleep,
I don't want to be alone in the dark
I want to be warm, wanted, safe.
But soon, I drift to sleep anyway,
Dreaming of warmth, happiness, security
out of the cold and miserable rain.
Soon I realized that I was in heaven

Comments

[redHeadfones]

thanks ^w^

[Keyblade_Master_346]

Awesome Poem!

[redHeadfones]

thank you very much ^w^

[Shazam 145]

It really good ^_^