Shedding

• Artist: DDrox316
• Description: Not sure... i just wrote it
  I think the last line would sound really pretty in a song :heart:
• Date: 11/07/2009
• Tags: shedding

I'll shed my mask
Push away my fears
To uncover
What I've been
Holding back,
Hiding all these years
And suddenly I feel
Free
Liberated
Nothing is holding me back
And I can fly... tonight

Comments

[Sunafire]

You could add a little more symbolism into this to create the meaning you're saying quite obviously here.
And I agree, the last line is pretty.

[The Guardian Of Cats]

I Like it ^^ 10/5
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