Awkward Silence

• Artist: Tsutsuku
• Description: A peom that focuses on the silent dinner table...
  
  
  
  I understand my peom doesn't flow well but I wrote this while I was still in school and was wondering on how I did and if it is written somewhat decent.
• Date: 11/12/2009
• Tags: awkward silence

The screech of chairs pushed across the floor,
the scraping of a fork on a plate,
the pounding of a drumming heart,
the silence strikes a nervous chord,
hasteful glances and smiles appear,
while trying to break a silence not so dear.