Mercy's Wonderland

• Artist: Bittersweet Contradiction
• Description: Just a poem I wrote about my boyfriend.
• Date: 11/13/2009
• Tags: mercys wonderland

Sometimes I feel like the Chesire Cat
I don't seem mad
At least not untill I start talking
Then the Queen Of Hearts would agree quite easily
The White Rabbit would take time from his busy schedule to tell you so
The Mad Hatter would be talking sense for once
The March Hair could tell you without a single riddle
The King Of Hearts says it with confidence
The Door Mouse knows it to be true and he sleeps the day away
The Caterpillar could spell it out for you
Even dear Alice, who doesn't fully understand this world, know it
Baby, I'm mad about you

Comments

[Sunafire]

I really like this poem, its the poem itself, not what it looks like that matters. I like how you used a famous book's characters to express your feelings in a different way. This poem is brilliant.

[areyououthere]

i can't read that light blue color; LED monitors and whatnot; oh, and centering a piece is like centering your car; you've gone off-course and are about to collide with an 18-wheeler truck; demise and judgement day will quickly follow.