I Don't Care, I Love You!

• Artist: O IVI E G A
• Description: I wrote this one day while reading a book but, I really hope you like it.
  I've been getting questions about it being about someone and yes, yes it is. SO STOP ASKING xD . This is also a Re-Entry, I submitted it once before but it didn't do so well so i figured why not do it again?
  but, I would want this poem to help you think about your special someone :3
  <3
  
• Date: 11/29/2009
• Tags: dont care love

My mind is so clouded
But my heart is clear
It beats for you and only you
So see me more as this feels so right

Your eyes are so cold
Yet I sense great feeling behind those eyes
Why hide them when it can make you stronger
Let me be the first to see them shine

You know me well when I only know little of you
So please take me with you
and only you
and show me your world

I need to tell you
And I need to tell you now
I have fallen in love with you
So please let me be with you

Finally we can be together
But I have only one request
Show me your true eyes....

As I don't care what others think......

Comments

[xI run with scissorsx]

i really like the emotion behind it, GREAT job. You should write more!!

[Regenki]

I enjoyed reading your poetry and understood its meaning, but to be honest it lacks flow. Well, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see your next work of art. ^^

[Hana Kaicho]

:3 It's kinda cute~

[Siel Kosane]

The love is felt, Sukeh x3, and I loves it!

[Duo Sadakichi]

awws cute

[O IVI E G A]

lol Shinzo ya little creeper! xD

[TheIgnorantWiseman]

Sis, you're poetry is great! And by any chance were you reading Miki Falls >w>??xD?