Sunrise

• Artist: rockgirl2012
• Description: ok you might think this is corny but my friend wrote this for a girl he really likes and showed it to me. plz plz plz tell me what you think about it
• Date: 11/29/2009
• Tags: sunrise

As beautiful as a sunrise
yet as gentle as the summer breeze
your smile warms up a room.
I shut my eyes and think of you every single day,
i can't believe you are the
victor.
you've won my heart today,
they say i'm a love expert
but i'm really not that great,
wheather i'm good or not
others can debate.
My heart doth beat when you grow near,
but not when you are far
away.
Many people may share my love for you.
but i hope you'll be with me again someday.
My feelings for you still grow, i know this to be true,
you may not love me in this way,
but i've been in love with you.

Comments

[BlueFheiry]

i love it..
sunrise are really beautiful..
to have put it on song or poem is even much lovelier..
did a great job... 5/5

[gh3tto8uddha]

personadamel1's quote: i think that he put a lot of EFFOR (effort?) on that poem and it came from the heart i'm a writer my self so i NOW (know?) when someone is TRAYING (trying?) or not. if you want my OPPINEUN (opinion?) he did a good job on it tell him good luck ps I'M NOT GAY JUST IN CASE (wtf? lol) i just got a lot of EXPIRENSES (experiences?) .
Um...mind the typos, especially if your going to claim to be a writer, lol. And what's the deal with the whole "I'm not gay thing", seriously. Hom

[personadamel1]

i think that he put a lot of effor on that poem and it came from the heart i'm a writer my self so i now when someone is traying or not. if you want my oppineun he did a good job on it tell him good luck ps i'm not gay just in case lol i just got a lot of expirenses