Who must it be?

• Artist: snakesta
• Description: It's a poem I kind of just wrote in the moment and to be quite honest, I'm not sure what my life has in for me at all.
• Date: 12/20/2009
• Tags: relationships love pain confusion

Who,
oh who,
her,
her it must be,
take a shot,
risk a friendship,
for a relationship,
worth it or not,
take a shot,
miss it be,
shut down,
a sign or not,
give up,
or keep trying,
live in the past,
never let go,
or move on,
and try again,
another shot,
or another lifetime,
her or her,
present or past,
make my past,
into my future,
or my present,
into a new future,
what do I do,
who is it,
who,
oh who,
I don't know.

Comments

[BlueFheiry]

hmm.. thanks for commenting on my poem..
but i think you're a better poet than i..
you can write so few words, and yet you have conveyed your message all at once.. you have a gift.. to make full use of only few words, and yet in itself already is complete and full.. ^_^
i hope you keep on writing.. and i would greatly look forward to your next piece.. and be glad to read another wonder from you.. ^_^
thanks again.. ^_^

[BlueFheiry]

i love the flow of your words..
you're a good writer..
you write from the heart and it shows.. ^_^
keep it up.. nice job! ^_^ 5/5