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• Artist: inking the world
• Description: It needs a title but I am not sure what to call it if you have any suggestions pleae let me know!!
• Date: 12/22/2009
• Tags: body hurt pain scars

When does it end? I don't know. And when It does end the Choking starts.

Then the Pain comes again. Like a river it flows through my body.

It knocks down my Defenses. Leaves me weak like a crumpled piece of paper.

Why does it hurt? I don't know. It is making you happy but all it brings me is Damage and Distruction.

Why do I keep falling for you? I don't know. You know just how to play me to get it every time.

And where do you go after it all ends? I don't know. I know my pain does not affect you.

Where you sit the sun shines. But my corner is filled with Shadows. Why? I don't know.

There are no scars on your body. It is perfection. But you scar me to make up for that.

So where will it end?
When will someone finally see through you disguise?
And not call me Crazy?
I don't know.

-Let get something straight

I am not Crazy

You are.

Comments

[Miaka_of_the_Shadows]

you could Call it The Truth, Or the reality of it all. btw... U r greattt!!!! ♥

[inking the world]

Thnxs!! I may go with Why or I Don't Know

[_M00nLiT_Ni9hT_]

hmm...many titles for this one:
Clueless, Effective, Who's Crazy?, Why?, I Don't Know, Your Disguise
thats all i can think of ^^
great writing, descriptive, and the emotions is there
smile