what i see

• Artist: Renaissance Ace
• Description:
• Date: 01/18/2010
• Tags: mirror love life hate world

what i see


i look in the mirror and what do i see
i see a man who wants to be free
i see a man who wants to be
i see a man that just wants to love

i look in the mirror and what do i see
i see a man who wants to survive
i see man who is a good friend
i see a man who does not cry

i look in the mirror and what do i see
i see a man that always asks why
i see a man who doesn't like to lie
i see a man who likes a fantasy story

i look in the mirror and what do i see
i see a man who thinks life is a fantasy story
i see a man who cant dream
i see a man of will

i look in the mirror and what do i see
i see a man of life
i see a man who thinks he understands every thing
i see a man who can learn

i look in the mirror and what do i see
i see a man who can yearn
i see a man of no harm
i see a man that is free and that man is me

Comments

[Aquatine]

Interesting. Besides asking you to capitalize, that it is a great reflection poem. I like the repetition, however I wished you departed from the repetition near the end and instead, started it with something different since changes in the patten of the poem can highlight certain verses and clue the reader into the fact that the last stanza is important.