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When the day goes by
I wonder where am I
I feel as if I am lost drifting along a stream
Or maybe in a dream
Because when I see your face
I feel as if out of place
I feel dazed
But at the same time amazed
Your smile brightens up my day
It makes me feel a funny way
Your laugh makes me want to dance
Or maybe even prance
Your eyes glisten like the sun
And when I look at them I know you are the one
I am too shy to tell you in person
That is true
But all I want in life is you
- Title: I Love You
- Artist: diji115
- Description:
- Date: 01/27/2010
- Tags: love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Yureiaa Hearts - 02/15/2010
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Cute, but your meter is a little un-rhythmic.
Try to get the rhythm to flow smoother, and you'll have an excellent poem. - Report As Spam
- Crying_Blue - 02/01/2010
- very cute i love it 5/5
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