The Flowers of Life

• Artist: x Minato Kamikaze x
• Description: just came up with this poem today... ^_^
• Date: 02/01/2010
• Tags: flowers life

Life is but a flower
The pettles can be beutiful
full of color...
they can shine!
they can reach the top of the world!
but with every good
there is a bad...
the pettles on the flower can rot...
they can burn
darken
and steep to the lowest of the low...
some flowers can love...
some can hate...
after all...
Life is but a flower...

Comments

[iiEatChurBrains]

Nice symbolism. It's true. For every pretty thing in life, there has to be something ugly to counter it.
Four stars. The dots at the end of every line is kind of distracting.
Good Though.