I Believe

• Artist: The Flies Are Dancing
• Description: Poem for class. . . I haven't handed is in so you can much suggestions! ;) Just kidding. There is a couple parts I don't like, but overall I am pretty proud of it. We had to write a poem in this style: http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/miss-rosie/ , and there were certian words and stuff we had to keep.
  
  (PS: If you don't get it, it's about Jesus.)
• Date: 02/18/2010
• Tags: believe jesus poem christain

When I first heard of you
____bruised like a common outlaw
______dieing, bloodied beyond recignition
____I couldn't imagine it was true
Or when I first pictured you
____in that garden tomb
______suddenly alive once more
______breathing, living, appearing before the people
______like a risen lamb that was once slain
I find strength when I picture your love
____you who understands everything
____you who used to be human
I believe
____through the hard times
I believe

Comments

[xkibaxgirlx]

I knew it was about Jesus from all the clues. :] Me likes it! 5/5