Life's Datum

• Artist: Adonis-Magi
• Description: A poem I wrote about this avatar. The animation is above the poem.
  
  Comment and rate please!
• Date: 02/20/2010
• Tags: lifes datum poem

tab While he gazes, at the "perfect" place below,
He sees a demonic world filled with woe.


tab While others think they are evil none,
He only sees what he wants done.


tab The people say that he is mad,
Because of him they are no longer glad.


tab They know the truth, but will not believe,
That this man, is the only sane man.


tab Is this not a story, just a poem,
Or lies of our life's "true" datum?

Comments

[Mizuki Ayu]

I like it, it really makes the animation make sense. ^^ I was wondering why stanza 4 doesn't rhyme while the rest do?

[seven_Sin_incarnate]

eh, it was alright. its really to short for me to get into, but then again thats just me.

[the_ashen_child]

like the animation, made me think of Jekel/Hide