My imagination

• Artist: Purple_Pearl_Girl
• Description: This is a freeverse poem. comments on it would still be nice though. I would like to hear your opinion and what I should change and how you feel about this poem. thank you for taking your time to read it as well.
  This poem is about if you lose someone. You think you are going crazy. You think they might not have ever existed. They did though. It also proves that your imagination is the most powerful thing any person can have. For without imagination, how can we have knowlegde?
  
• Date: 03/14/2010
• Tags: imagination love lost picture proof

heart I look up and down.
The person who use to fill your shoes,
is no where to be found.

I search and search.
I grow tired and week.
The one I loved is gone.

Your smell still fills the air.
I still see you when I close my eyes.
Why is finding you so hard?

I have no proof you ever existed.
Mabey you were just a dream.
Mabey I am just crazy.

But as I lay,
I hold your old shirt next to my chest,
and the pictures of your sibilings.

By then I realize that if I am going crazy,
I have evidence to say I might be wrong,
for I have proof in the place I thought had been tricking me of you,

MY IMAGINATION! heart

Comments

[kkzoey]

that was really good but it was more like a stort story then a poem... but i still loved it