I Will Love You Forever.

• Artist: Murderous Temptation
• Description: uhh made it on the spot im pround of myself but i think it suxx is it good for a first try?
• Date: 03/31/2010
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I wish i was able to see,
Just a chance to break free.
From all that is wrong in the world,
I just think about love between a boy and a girl,

The time is wrong,
Yes i know
I knew it all along
Yes i know.
That you dont love me,
And now i can see so clear,
I will love forever and all i want is you near.

Comments

[L_MTmule]

Errrr, that last line* Sorry about that o.0

[L_MTmule]

Very good for a first try, Jenni! I'd suggest adding the word "but" to the beginning of that line so that it ties off making a little more sense. It also intensifies your commitment even when you know that he doesn't care. :3