-
Death seems Black
Like a worm hole in space
I feel the sorrow of those who's loved ones die
I hear the screams of those who were killed
I smell the sent of rotting roses in an empty room
I touch the suface of pain
I taste the bitterness of depression
Death seems Black
- by xXx Fr3sher_then_air xXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/01/2010 |
- Skip
- Title: Death
- Artist: xXx Fr3sher_then_air xXx
- Description: this is a poem about how Death seems to me
- Date: 05/01/2010
- Tags: death
- Report Post
Comments (5 Comments)
- Death_Lives_on - 05/17/2010
- I like dicriptivness too i got to git it a 5/5
- Report As Spam
- XxRebelChildxX - 05/14/2010
- niiiiice. i like it. I love the descriptiveness. it really gives your poem a good sense of visualization. Great job
- Report As Spam
- xXx Fr3sher_then_air xXx - 05/06/2010
- Please comment critisism is loved and apreciated biggrin
- Report As Spam
- Imperious Risk - 05/05/2010
- I like the way you worded it, i gotta give it 5/5
- Report As Spam
- alexandera 180 - 05/02/2010
- Love it! 5/5
- Report As Spam
- |
- |
-
Submit
