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Paper Construct/b]
Searching for our lost Innocence...
Our dreams faded away into Nothingness
Stretching My hands into the Empty Space
My Heart betas against my Chest
I've got to find why you went away
While I was building up a Castle of Crads
A strong gust of Wind blew it down
And I'm left all alone
With my Castles in the Air
A Paper Construct
A brightly-coloured paper construct
Was floating in the air
With my out-stretched hands, I ran behind it
But Time fllets--like Writing on Water
Nothing leaves its mark
A boat-full of lovely Paper Constructs
Overturned in the Sea
And they float away from me
Popping on the Water
While I try to reach
Where I'll never be
The Unspeakably
Lovely
Paper Constructs
Paper Lantern
One by one
All the Paper Lanterns
Blink blink
Go on again
One Two Ten
All of them
Lighting up the sky
Countless
Blink blink
Fireflies
Hoarding on a Tree
Lighting up
The Infinite sky
For you & me
Going off
Trembling Flames
Leaping up again
oh-oh-oh
ahhhh
The Paper Lanterns
Blink, tremble
go on again
Blink, blink
Leap up
Blink, blink
Leap up again
Paper Thin
This wall between us is
Paper Thin
A thin glass wall through which
We can see
Each other
but never touch...
The Line between Truth and Lies is thin
Staring out from between you & me...
And I try to cross the Line..
To grasp your hands in mine
What I gained after this war I can't tell
The Beginning is far away
Justice is Razor sharp
Cutting out the picture of us
Together
Somewhere
The Line between us is Paper Thin
and yet there's just no Bridge
From you to me
Stranded here for Eternity
Never Touch
Gaze at each other
For the Rest of Our Lives
God is Mercifully Cruel
My chest constricts with Pain
Paper Thin
But no bridge...
Your pain-filled eyes looking at me
We'll stay like this for Eternity
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- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/09/2010 |
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- Title: Paper Trilogy
- Artist: laced In shadows
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Description:
Just a little song I made up..i can't decide if its a song or a poem..anyway its supposed to be a trilogy..and I don't really have the Gold, so I'll post the three together...please rate/comment..criticisms are welcome
Paper Constructs
Paper Lanterns
Paper Thin - Date: 05/09/2010
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Comments (6 Comments)
- The_ Beautiful_ Star_XD - 07/01/2010
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it rocks its realistic i luv it
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- laced In shadows - 05/18/2010
- actually this was written as songs, but I can't work out a melody for Paper Thin. Paper Lanterbs and Paper Constructs are already songs.
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 05/16/2010
- This wouldn't make a great poem, so I suggest making it a song. Seems like it could flow better that way too.
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- laced In shadows - 05/09/2010
- what about the others, though? could you tell me whats wrong with them so I could improve? (this is my first time doing this stuff so I'm badly in need of advise smile )
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- laced In shadows - 05/09/2010
- thank you!
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- JennyW97 - 05/09/2010
- I Like paper lanterns.
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