i need to do something

• Artist: breanna xx
• Description: i need to stop doubting,
  if these things ive decided is a good thing…
  
  i need to keep on convincing
  to my self that this is the right thing
  
  i need to keep on forcing
  my heart to feel the same thing…
  
  i need to be accepting,
  accept that this is all happening…
  
  i need to stop crying,
  
  i need to stop on wishing…
  
  stop on hoping …
  
  i need to do something..
  to stop my heart .. from hurting…
  
  i need to . ... i need to…
• Date: 05/21/2010
• Tags: need

burning_eyes xp gonk crying neutral stressed neutral cry

Comments

[breanna xx]

uh. yeah. not really good in english you see still learning.. uh can u please tell me from which part from my poem has its wrong grammars?? if you dont mind cause i dont mind really

[maydaymouse]

You put the poem where the description should be, but I won't mark you down for that. So anyways, I like the poem. A lot of people, like myself could relate to what you've written, and it came across pretty well. Just work on the grammar errors, and where it actually goes and it'll be great. Nice work, keep writnig!^^ 5/5
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