I am Poem

• Artist: General_Fallen
• Description: A poem i wrote for my English class. Enjoy! :heart:
• Date: 05/31/2010
• Tags: poem

I Am

I am a beautiful butterfly with wings of gold.

I wonder about the remaining days of earth.

I hear the the birds in the trees and the flapping of my sister's wings.

I see the sky turn blue and gold when the earth awakes.

I want to live forever to see thy beauty of nature

I am a beautiful butterfly with wings of gold.


I pretend that I am a cloud, floating endlessly in the sky.

I feel the touch of an angel against my wings.

I touch the blue pool sky that reminds me of the ocean.

I worry that a storm might carry me away.

I cry to think that many of my siblings may die of a bird's beak.

I am a beautiful butterfly with wings of gold.


I understand that i may die someday.

I say that the angels above exist.

I dream that i will change the world

I try to bring forth song to the world.

I hope that my songs is as beautiful as a crickets.

I am a beautiful butterfly with wings of gold.

Comments

[General_Fallen]

I love the lines of poetry, bring happiness from inside me.
It brings forth your care for this, rhyming words are most beautiful. Thank you for showing your gratitude towards my poetry. much appreciated. smile

[Mr Clocksy]

beauty is splashed everywhere,
but i c our world is too blind to care.
u capture in the poem subtle grace,
u have capture what i want 2 call natures face.
ur words can reach out and touch the sad,
to prove them wrong and all is not bad.
we all must make this world understand someday, oneday,
we always have the words 2 say.
i hope u have high hopes for ur wonderful works and art,
4 it is a gift from ur heart.
4 we all have gifts that continue 2 hide,
u kno there is something inside

[General_Fallen]

thanks ^^

[la haine pacifique]

i luv this, its really good, 5/5