Can't let go

• Artist: xXx suicidal_skittles xXx
• Description: This is a poem a friend of mine wrote. I thought it was pretty good. please read and rate and comment if you like. thanks :)
• Date: 06/21/2010
• Tags: love gone over

He gets home from work with a rose in his hand,
gleam in his eye only a few can understand.
First words are "babe, you home?"
only to realize he's all alone.

He calls he phone,
only to get an unwanted tone.
he makes dinner for two
with candles brand new.

He sits and waits
until the darkness awakes.
The candles go out at the stem
as he calmly tries to call her again.

Maybe late she will be home to me,
I'll make her a bath so my love she can see.
The water is hot and the rose petals spin
a few more jasmine candles cast a low dim.

He sits and he paces,
defeat creases across his many faces.
he crawls into bed with tears falling,
praying to go to come calling.

Four months have gone though,
When will he let go?

Comments

[Immy_FB]

i like it, very...
anyway, i like how at first its like the women is cheating on him but actually he's kinda stalking her in the end.

[xXx suicidal_skittles xXx]

* calls her phone