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There is no story,
There is no lie,
We just sit here waiting,
Until we die,
But why, says you,
don't be such a fool,
we all died for you,
didn't you want us to?
I can't see why not,
guess I always thought
that somebody like you
with a heart so pure
and a heart so true
coulda seen the truth
But I guess inside
We're all ******** blind
or it could just be
that we're all just terrified
that'd make more sense
you were supposed to be the one
the one who could break it all
but instead, you just took a fall
went into their pocket
because it was warm and safe
made a pillow of lint
and just sat there to wait
we came here today
to bring you outside
it's cold, that's true
but your life is for you
just take a peek out
see if you like what you see
if you see what you saw before
maybe you'll come with me?
- Title: Don't Submit
- Artist: Coolyei
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Description:
A melancholy poem I made.
P.S. I love getting comments, P.M.s, and everything you might want to throw at me. Criticism is welcome, too, and I'm not going to say "nothing negative". If you troll me, you'll get it back tenfold. If you don't like it, that's cool.
- Date: 06/27/2010
- Tags: dont submit inspiring fear death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Chelly17 - 07/05/2010
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i love it!!!!!!!!!! dont stop writing....this is good....5/5
please take a look at mine and tell me what you think.... - Report As Spam
- maydaymouse - 06/29/2010
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I like it. I'm sorry but I don't have much of a feedback. Keep writing. 5/5
Rate back please? - Report As Spam