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In the puddle of blood
Dieing in the mud
The battle ends
Good bye my friends
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- brittany bloom - 01/16/2011
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~It is spelled dying, not dieing
~Goodbye is one word, not two
Very short- poems don't need to be long, but this time I think the length is preventing there from being any real depth to it. - Report As Spam
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