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You see her lifeless eyes crying,
Can't you see she's afraid of dying?
She reaches her hand for you,
For that is all she can do,
If only earlier she had known,
You can see where the sticthes are sewn,
Her breathing is slow,
And her heartbeat low,
Just because she has been clinging on so long,
This will be her song ....
- Title: Her (cancer) COMMENTS PLEASE
- Artist: koigirl
- Description: this is a sad peom about a woman with breast cancer, no i have not ever been in this situation and i pity those who have but cancer has affected lives around me
- Date: 07/13/2010
- Tags: cancer comments please
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Comments (2 Comments)
- koigirl - 07/13/2010
- lol im good with poems but a song would be too long for me thats why i refer to poems becoming songs
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- I screwed Princess Peach - 07/13/2010
- this is good. 5/5 i guess you want every one of your poems to be songs. XP idk
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