My Voice

• Artist: candie57
• Description: HIYA!! im not very good and rhyming or anything deep lol but il try my best!! i cant tell u wats its about cuz u have to find out urself (also bkuz i dont kno wat its about lol) enjoy!! and sorry for any misspelled words u might come across for or 5 dif poems all have a dif meaning :XD
• Date: 07/29/2010
• Tags: voice

PATH

A path I'm lost in
I've seen this place before
The more I follow the more
I wonder:

COLOR

The Sun is gold, the color
Of faith for me. I look
Up and the blinding light.
But why am I a dull gray?

CROWDS

I don't fit in crowds
No one likes me no
One cares. If I'm me,
Why aren't I I'm special?

ANSWERS

I follow the path and
My questions are answered
I'm a blooming red a folower
thats not yet blossomed,
I'm special, better, then
I ever was

Comments

[_a s d f g hannah]

i love it!! biggrin i like the 1st && last stanza errr... yeah xD

[TragicFishball]

Nice, I like the second one the best. 5/5 <3

[candie57]

so many things messed up.. ill rewrite lol for answers: I follow the path and my questions are answered I'm a blooming red a FLOWER thats not yet blossomed I'm special, better, then I ever was.. lol sorry and cross off the I'm nxt to special lol