Following the river

• Artist: Mistress-Amethyst
• Description: It doesn't sound quite done to me but I cannot add anymore and still have it sound decent :/ any ideas? And if you don't understand, it's about following a river. That's about it, just following a river as far as you can. Ever tried it?
• Date: 07/29/2010
• Tags: following river

As the water trickles over stone
I cannot help but feel alone
I step along the rivers path
Over rocks and through the grass
Following its very life
A tiny bed set in a line
Beneath the forest and into the land
Not a single helping hand
It cuts through rocks and falls from cliffs
I do my best to follow it
But alas it goes too far
I cannot chase it anymore
I look into the brightest sky
And cannot help but wonder why
Why does the water journey so long?
With only the company of its own song
The song of water over stones
I wonder if it feels alone

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It's beautiful and so alone feeling!!!!!!!