Empty or is it?

• Artist: Taurius Dreams
• Description: something i found in my old journal
• Date: 08/01/2010
• Tags: empty

Cloudy skies cover an empty field. Although I wonder, is it really empty?
With it's silent grass, graceful and unchanging.
What about the creatures beneath the earth.
Perhaps fulfilling unknown dreams.
Why must a silent field strike us as empty.
For it holds beautiful nature within itself.
Can it truly be empty?

Comments

[zakora1000]

i love u dont need to change it 5/5

[Altar II]

I really like the idea that is being brought out here, but the wording seems a bit...wordy
you use three different questions at the same time, one denying your opening statement
also clouds over, not cover